Nowadays there is a wide range of TV programs. But instead of watching educational programs, news or documentary films, more and more people prefer to watch TV shows, soap operas or serials. And this negatively affects knowledge acquisition skills. What are the primary causes of this tendency? How is it possible to make educational TV programs more popular?

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a big impact in our community, it affects our daily living and influences us to many things. Nowadays

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more popular one of the

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is because of the advertisement they are showing to attract more viewers, on how they make exciting and interesting the trailers are so society will

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their attention leading to watch their shows. Another one is, people

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of these famous actors and actresses who are playing the roles. Social media is

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too to update us on what to watch. Educational programs should be more

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on how they can attract viewers and give

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set up especially to the kids and young ones for them to watch these shows. Parents

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In a nutshell
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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