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Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions? Provide examples and explanations.

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In Today's
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 world, an increasing number of students rely on online classes in order to get knowledge through computers. These changes in the learning process have brought a special concern regarding the possible decrease of
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 of teachers in the classrooms. Having
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 a system can provide various advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, Nowadays, online learning plays a
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 flexible, affordable and foster more interaction.
Firstly
, people would rather take part in online lessons leading to educating all the
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.
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students travel to various views, they can
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 learn by computers or
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tablets
. As computers are being more and more in education and it is very flexible for them.
Secondly
, in a physical classroom, the teacher may write notes on a blackboard. With an online class, an instructor can write down notes on
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 whiteboard. They can edit and enrich videos to create a better learning experience online.
On the other hand
, the main disadvantage of online learning around technical problems
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 as audio, video or connection issues. The role
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 process is still very important and undergraduate people
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 which helps them to improve their social skills. In conclusion, online learning is
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convenient
 owing to cheaper for everyone.
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training opportunities.
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