Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In today’s modern world, immigration has drastically surged and one of the most common
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is lack of fluency in the foreign word which could
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. I personally agree with the statement mentioned above as a lack of communication skills could lead to cultural shock and cause various mental health issues.
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on foreign shores is a style barrier and cultural shock.
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is often observed that the accent of both native speakers and settler vary considerably ,even the speakers with good fluency may not be able to communicate easily.
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, a survey conducted by the Indian Institute of Technology,Ranchi ,revealed that the IELTS examination for the official speech English dialect is a billion-dollar industry and the most common factor for enrolling
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exam is to decrease the phobia and improve skills.
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, improper communication could pose difficulties in performing certain jobs which needs fluency and command compared to a native speaker.
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, sometimes people are not able to speak to others due to
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associated with the vocabulary
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, it could lead to mental disorders
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are in a greater percentage. In a nutshell, in my ,opinion both public and private organisations should come forward to implement certain rules and regulations which stand for the benefit of the people in the long term so that people don’t suffer from practical and social trouble in the communication of a foreign dialect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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