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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

#students #focus #attention #school
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Nowadays education system has been developed from a few yesteryears due to technological development in the education system. Same have been made positive and negative impacts on
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 learning. Due to
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 students are facing issues with their classroom attention. As well , low involvement in teaching
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 impacting the
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 understanding.
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, mobile contact
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 a significant issue for these problems. Resent of times almost all students have mobile contact.
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, present Co-vide lockdowns have created a path to get the phones for all
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 required or not. Because of online classes. Though, a maximum of children is using that phones for unwanted things like playing games, watching movies and
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 started to focus on mobile phones,
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 high enough thing to lose their focus on classroom attention. The teachers only can solve these issues instantly. The way of approach and teaching would make the path for
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 to be focused.
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, in my 10th ,standard I and my complete
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 people have paid more attention to mathematics
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 because of my teacher, which
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 was always bored for
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 pupil. Because of my teacher that involvement has been coming for our complete
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. He always share his real-life examples to communicate the syllabus to us which helped us for a better understanding of problematic theories. In conclusion, whatever the technology come and go, teachers approach will always stay with
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 on their classes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distractions
  • focus
  • pay attention
  • lack of interest
  • motivation
  • fatigue
  • sleep
  • classroom environment
  • teaching methods
  • technology addiction
  • social media
  • peer pressure
  • workload
  • support
  • active learning strategies
  • engaging
  • student-centered teaching
  • realistic goals
  • rewards
  • balanced lifestyle
  • screen time
  • breaks
  • physical activity
  • support and guidance
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