Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays

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is referred to as the most hazardous to our

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, and authorities have to interfere in a way that cigarettes and similars must be banned. I wholeheartedly agree with

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statement, and in the following paragraphs, I will explain the reasons why no one should incentivize

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of all, medicals research already has proof that smoking

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is one of

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of cancer around the world.

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, apparently many

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have ignored those facts and started

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anyway.

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who

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fighting against stress, financial issues or even working in a bad environment, might find relief in

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those substances. Nicotine,

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, is one of the substances that keep

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addicted even though they want to quit,

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people

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start developing serious

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problems before they can stop

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, smokers have more chances to develop other diseases,

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as obesity and diabetes. Usually, individuals who have the

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of

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do not practice sports because they have less oxygen in their bodies and always feel tired.

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, they are more sedentary, and

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situation increases the risk of has other dangerous illnesses unrelated

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smoke

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, the

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care system will have more expenses to keep these patients healthier.

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, the medical authorities could address these costs to deeply research how

people

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could deal better with stressful situations that make them start smoking.

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, they could create new programs to help smokers give up tobacco products.

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,

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will learn new ways to cope with issues and keep their mental

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. To conclude, smoking could cause many problems to individuals'

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, and it is still a global problem. Governments should take action and banned all kinds of cigarettes, but because it is very addictive, they need

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to guarantee mental support for those who want to stop and create more research to help

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do not even start

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terrible

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