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E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of this prblem outweigh advantages?

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In the modern world, keeping in touch in professional and personal cases has been distributed noticeably by e-mail. Unfortunately, it is assumed that effect of
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the merits of sending messages like providing surged productivity and demerits as suffering from blurred vision.
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 drawback of using messengers regularly is health issues. Specifically, the usage of digital tools diminishes your vision.
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 other, the condition of their eyes deteriorated rapidly.
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professional productivity and getting higher
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 your career ladder. It means that if workers have
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 to the customers’ or their colleagues’ requests, they will achieve their goals in a short period of time. It will guarantee
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 professional success in the workplace.
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, when people get replies fast, they stay satisfied and estimate others’ labour higher. All in all, despite the frequent criticism
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 moving upward of e-mail users’ proportion,
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 way of communicating has drastically altered our capacity either professionally and socially. In my humble opinion, I tend to believe that the obvious good points of messaging online outweigh its objections.
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