Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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growth and development will be based on

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how

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childhood is spent.

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some might say that, doing an

enjoyment

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activity will lead the

child

to develop their

skills

and creativity rather

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. In my opinion, both plays

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role in the

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development of the

child

.

Firstly

, reading improves the

child

’s cognitive

skills

.

This

is a really important factor because, reading paves a way for the

child

to understand the language more clearly so that, they can use it properly once they at a stage of teenage.

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, we can see a future journalist or

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famous author, once they have a good handle

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the language they prefer. If a

child

is not encouraged to read, it will be really difficult for

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, as we know the major part of schooling involves reading. So, I prefer

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reading will ripe benefits.

However

, conducting enjoyable

activites

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activities

such

as playing soccer, drawing will

also

improve the

child

skills

and ability to create.

This

is because, the activities that make

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the child

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a happy,

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their brain to be social and helps them to be one step ahead of the activity.

For example

, they may help the parents to set up the ground for playing soccer

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or pick up the necessary

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’ for their drawing.

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, these

skills

and creativeness will

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help to become more socially accepted in

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society. In conclusion, reading helps a

child

develop the

skills

to learn the language

as well as the doing an enjoyable activity

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, as well as the doing an enjoyable activity,

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improves their social and creative

skills

equally.