Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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culture which exists in different parts of the world and the easiest way to experience them is through the tourist attractions in that place. There is a heated discussion on whether

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projects are conserving or degrading the traditions of a place.

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insight into the pros and cons

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latter discussion is required to arrive at a proper conclusion. The advantages of showcasing native attractions aimed at

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are to be discussed

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. When the artform or

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of a country is displayed in front of a

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foreign

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and native crowd, the art and

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are preserved and carried on to the

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generation

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, it can even spur interest in

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some of the viewers to

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study about that craft.

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preserving the art is important, it is equally important to support the artist, the money the artist receives from performing is

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great support.

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, people from all over the world travel to India to experience

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cutural

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diversity, there is a huge amount of population working in the

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sector and

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from coir, bamboo, clay etc are mainly focusing on a

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foreign

customer.

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Kathakali

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, are old dance forms

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are still performed only because there is demand for them in

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sectors.

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, there are many advantages they are often diminished due to the commercialisation of

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tourism

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sector, which adversely affect the cultural history of a place. Hotels and holiday companies often charge hefty fees from tourists but the service provided would be cheap and products sold

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. The people who perform are often inexperienced and are not having any background in that field,

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the original tradition is modified and its value is degraded.

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Kathakali

a dance form which used to happen overnight is now being performed for just 5 minutes, similar is the case for ayurvedic treatments which lasted for months now is done in a day, even worst is the market for

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counterfeit

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which deals from simple coir products to crystals. In conclusion, looking at the advantages and disadvantages, I believe that converting traditional values into

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provides

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opportunity for the natives and will help in preserving the culture,

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strict monitoring is required from the authority to make sure that the cultural essence is not lost.