Some people argue that technological inventions, such as smartphones, are making people less socially active. Do you agree or disagree?

A matter of considerable controversy at present is the issue of

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technology like mobile phones are affecting human beings social life. I

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with the given notion and will explain the logical standpoint in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Initially

, in

this

technological

era

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there are a plethora of

devices

are available

such

as smartphones, laptops and many more.

People

are using these technical

devices

according

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their

prefrences

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preferences

and needs, but

this

accessibility leads

towards

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many problems, one of the major

concern

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is that

people

are completely forgetting their social life and interaction with their loved ones and others.

For instance

, nowadays every family

members

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has their own mobile phones and it seems most of the time

people

are not communicating with each other under one roof because of these gadgets.

Moreover

, while morning walks and other physical activities like gym and weight lifting

people

mostly

prefered

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prefer

to

listen

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music on their cellphones

instead

of chatting or interacting with others. Apart from it, especially kids these days are like to play indoor games on the gadgets

instead

of outdoor games that effecting a lot to kids both physically and mentally,

as a result

of

this

they are becoming less socialise and remains busy in the gaming world.

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, according to the latest survey conducted by the

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of Australia that approximately eighty

percent

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of kids are

induldge

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indulge

indulged

in

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technical

devices

instead

of physical activities. To conclude, in

this

era of invention

everyday

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lots of forms of these

devices

are launching and

people

are addicting

with

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these inventions, government can play a vital role to overcome

this

soaring issue.