A matter of considerable controversy at present is the issue of
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technology like mobile phones are affecting human beings social life. I
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with the given notion and will explain the logical standpoint in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Initially
, in
this
technological
there are a plethora of
devices
are available
such
as smartphones, laptops and many more.
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devices
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their
and needs, but
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is that
people
are completely forgetting their social life and interaction with their loved ones and others.
For instance
, nowadays every family
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has their own mobile phones and it seems most of the time
people
are not communicating with each other under one roof because of these gadgets.
Moreover
, while morning walks and other physical activities like gym and weight lifting
people
mostly
to
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music on their cellphones
instead
of chatting or interacting with others.
Apart from it, especially kids these days are like to play indoor games on the gadgets
instead
of outdoor games that effecting a lot to kids both physically and mentally,
as a result
of
this
they are becoming less socialise and remains busy in the gaming world.
For example
, according to the latest survey conducted by the
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of Australia that approximately eighty
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of kids are
in
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technical
devices
instead
of physical activities.
To conclude, in
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lots of forms of these
devices
are launching and
people
are addicting
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these inventions, government can play a vital role to overcome
this
soaring issue.