News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in a newspaper. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news were reported?

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Nowadays, there are several channels to get
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,
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as the radio, TV, newspapers and the
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. I think the
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is the best among these. In my essay, I am going to explain why. Since its invention, the
Internet
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has been booming as a prospective industry. Not only because it is a combination of text, audio and video, but
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due to its
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convenience
. It has threatened the domination of spreading
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of the traditional media, and, I would say, is about to take control.We can find everything we want on the
Internet
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– the latest
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, books, songs, movies, cartoons… whatever. With the radio, we can merely hear. Compared to a newspaper, the radio and TV can provide the latest information.
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the breaking
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of the Americans’ attacking Iraq was immediately
availalbe
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available
online, as well as that the Twin Towers of New York were destroyed on September 11, 2001.
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, we just cannot carry TV 24/7. The
Internet
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is a
convinient
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convenient
way of getting information, as long as your mobile phone is connected or you possess a laptop. When I am
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a vehicle, I usually have my cellphone connected to the
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,
then
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browse through
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what happened
what happens
in the past few hours, or log in
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to begin
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a conversation with my friends. Reading a newspaper is
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a good way to kill time, but for me, a youngster, it is not so modern as “surfing online while commuting”. The traditional media will never disappear, though the
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has taken a big advantage in the competition. And definitely, there is still a long way for the
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to go. Anyway, the
Internet
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benefits me the most, and I highly appreciate it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • broadcast
  • print
  • news editors
  • viewership
  • readership
  • ratings
  • revenue
  • sensational stories
  • scandals
  • dramatic events
  • relevance
  • societal issues
  • prominence
  • political influences
  • corporate influences
  • biases
  • ownership
  • political affiliations
  • immediacy
  • locality
  • target audience
  • human interest stories
  • emotional responses
  • desensitization
  • public apathy
  • indifference
  • optimistic outlook
  • community achievements
  • acts of kindness
  • boosting morale
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