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Some people say that cooking food at home is a waste of time. They claim that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Since the old era of
humans
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, cooking has been one of the most important things
humans
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 always did because
humans
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 need to eat
food
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 to live, but
humans
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 do not stop at
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 step. They want to eat
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 with a delicious flavour. And the only way to have
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 is to
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 by themselves or let the other
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 for them.
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 with, cooking
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 at
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 has many positive effects
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 as make people have a better relationship by helping each other prepare the meal.
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, if we are cooking for ourselves, we can adjust the
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 flavour, especially for those restricted to the taste.
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, people with diabetes cannot eat sweet foods too much. It made these groups of people prefer to
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 by themselves over go to the
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.
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, the other positive effects of cooking at
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 are that it is cheaper to
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 at
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 than go out to the
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 if we live in the family. Despite
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 reason, many families decide to make their meal for the member of the family, and because of
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, it made the meal we cooked have precious memories that we will remember for the rest of our life. In summary, from the following reason and examples, I barely agree that the
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 is better and makes life easier than cooking at
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 because it is true that the
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 makes our lives easier to live.
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, cooking at
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 has many positive effects that eating at the
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 cannot provide,
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 as the following examples that have been discussed in the previous paragraph.
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