Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games together is a good way to build closer relationships. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

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, playing together has various advantages in a
relationship
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.
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, personally, I believe it is one of the best things to make a bond stronger. I think the aforementioned way for two reasons that I will explore in the ensuing essay.
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of all, it helps to get a chance to spend more
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with each other and make a good
relationship
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. People can know each other most when they can interact frequently. My personal example is a compelling illustration.
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, during my childhood, I play lots of games with a boy who is from my neighbour house. we know most of the staff of each other what is my favourite things and my character various things for that whenever I face any situation, I talk with him for his consultation and he
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comes foreword my help. That thing makes our friendship strong. All of that becomes possible for our getting roams by playing together.
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, you can more
opportunity
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help
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your mate in a
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of difficulty that can be a building block to drive the
relationship
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into
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deeper. When people face
an unwelcome situations
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an unwelcome situation
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that circumstances
who
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help them become closer in his heart, it is a normal phenomenon.
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, in my school years, I used to play games with one of my friends. At that
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, I found my friend was quite upset for some days about his family matter, but he did not want it to be share; so, he never talk about it with anybody, but one day he was in his severe situation that
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, I forced him to give me hints that situation.
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of some hard work, I am able to manage his position. It makes our bond stronger. In the light of the foregoing, I feel if we had no chance to play together we would not be too close. To sum up, playing together
help
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to strengthen a
relationship
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because you can know your partner through the exposer and can get help or serve it in the difficulties of others.
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