Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that nowadays crime has extensively increased worldwide. The question is , are

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video

games

the reason for increasing

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crime? In

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essay, I am going to draw my own point of view. In terms of the problem, the growth of

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violence in multiple cities around the world is associated with the spread of

cruelty

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games

in entertainment markets. The main reason given to support

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claim is that the excitement and the fascination that these

games

bring are the key essential to create a popular and top rank game. To illustrate, gaming industries are usually adding excitement tools and

real life

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scene

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to raise the income by manipulating

in

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gamer’s

feeling

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feelings

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.

In other words

, when a child playing a war game that has the main character fighting with different types of guns and explosive items, which

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on

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the player status not only mentally but

also

emotionally.

Hence

, the development of thrilling

games

will directly boost the gaming world influx which in turn leads to

build

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up

a stressful and cruel generations

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a stressful and cruel generation

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.

Moreover

, the absence of parent supervision plays a vital role in raising a criminal. While parents

busy

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with

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their

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they

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duties,

children

left

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without guides in spending their time

on

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playing

games

.

This

is because letting the

children

with no limitations on playing

games

that are suitable for their age is a potential reason to raise the violence. Regardless

parents

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of parents

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censorship, violent

games

are now easily accessible due to the spread of

advirtisment

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of these

games

in almost every website or application that the

children

use for their other intentions.

Thus

, allowing the

children

to play

games

unrestrictedly is going to expand the violence incidences unintentionally. In conclusion, it is evident that video

games

has

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prominent

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influence in increasing the crime rate among

children

. Entertainment companies and parents must ensure steps are taken to prevent

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phenomenon from deteriorating

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future.