Nowadays food has become much easier to purchase and prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

In

this

modern civilization, with

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industrialization, inhabitants are able to cook their own meals in a convenient way due to electronic appliances and well-prepared ingredients in supermarkets. Some citizens definitely believe that has enhanced the quality of their daily

lives

. In my point of view, I partially agree that it has improved the way

people

live because some drawbacks which fast food has increased health issues including obesity and heart attacks on a person's

lives

have

also

been created as well - you need to outline what those drawbacks are. On the one hand,

to begin

with, with the assistance of electronic technology,

people

spend less

time

cooking today than in the past.

For example

, in the past, there were no advanced inventions that we enjoyed cooking for preparation.

People

used to rely mostly on hand-made cookery and ancient methods, which were ultimately causing the issue of non-delicious meals and even the

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considerable action

of wastage of ingredients.

For instance

, the introduction of new recipes through new methods has not only made the taste of foods tastier

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but

also

reduced the amount of waste that was caused by the use of ancient ways.

Thus

,

this

brought comfort in the

lives

of

people

to save more money in order to invest it somewhere else to create an additional source of income.

As a result

,

this

will save them a tremendous amount of

time

. Despite having hectic lifestyles of daily activities, they are still able to make healthy meals for

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? family. At the same

time

, they

also

have more

time

for personal relaxation, social interaction, family

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time

, and sport, and self-improvement etc.

Therefore

, their

lives

will become more colourful and the standard of living will be enhanced

also

.

On the other hand

,

however

, there are some disadvantages impacts with

this

latest change, Changes in dietary and physical activity patterns are often the result of environmental and societal changes associated with

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and lack of supportive policies in sectors

such

as health, agriculture, transport, urban planning, environment, food processing, distribution, marketing, and education.Childhood obesity is associated with a higher chance of obesity, premature death and disability in adulthood. But

in addition

to increased future risks, obese children experience breathing difficulties, increased risk of fractures, hypertension, early markers of cardiovascular disease, insulin resistance and psychological effects. As a consequence, the change of cooking may not always benefit

people

. In conclusion, it is clear that significant changes made in the technology cyberpunk world have made cooking easier and not

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cumbersome work.

By contrast

, it has prompted unhealthy and inactive lifestyles as titty and nipple

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of the 1990s.