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proportion of households with electrical devices agree or disagree

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The
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 line graph illustrates the proportion of households with electrical devices from 1920 to 2019. Another graph provides information about how many
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 of
housework
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 per week in the same
period
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. Overall, using electrical devices experienced an upward trend throughout the
period
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, while the number of
hours
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 of
housework
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 showed a downward trend over the
period
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. In terms of electrical appliances, the percentages of washing machine and vacuum cleaner were at 40% and 30% respectively in 1920.
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, both of them increased gradually to 70% by 1960.
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 the proportion of vacuum cleaners continued to rise to 100%, washing machines had some fluctuation between 1960 and 2000.
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, refrigerator rate's started at nearly 0% which the lowest point at the
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 of the
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 whereas the figure experienced a dramatic growth to approximately 90% in 1960 and hit the maximum point in the
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 20 years. In terms of
housework
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, at the beginning of the
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, people spent 50
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 per week on
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, the number of
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 declined steadily from 1920 to 1980 ,above 30% in 1940 and under 20% in 1980.
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, the graph showed a continuation between 1980 and 2000 at about 15%.
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, It fell to around 10% at the end of the
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