Write about the following topic: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a presumption that it is advantageous to study with peers in a class physically rather than in a virtual environment at home. I partially agree
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this
statement because there are both merits and demerits for
this
scenario which I will be discussing
further
.
To begin
with, the major advantage of studying offline is it enhances social life.
Firstly
, being surrounded by people with diverse cultures and mindsets would make us ready to adapt with
time
.
Moreover
,
this
would make significant developments in the kids professional life as well.
Secondly
, it develops
time
management skills as the kid has to stick to a specific
time
routine. As the child needs to wake up at a specific
time
as he needs to attend
school
at
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time
.
Further
, in
school
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they maintain a schedule for class hours and break timings.
For instance
, my cousin who is a 14-year-old used to be very disciplined with his studies but
covid
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pandemic has messed his routine as he need not be physically present in
school
this
led to
time wasting
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.
Therefore
, offline schools though
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not seem to make a magnificent
differences
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it overall builds child’s diverse skills. On contrary,
online-education
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is the most happening thing these days. Due to the fact that
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it brings comfort as they need not wake up early in order to get ready and travel to
institute
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.
In addition
to
this
, it would not waste the most valuable resource
that is
Time
. Followed by
this
, it
also
provides
possibility
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the possibility
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to study various things rather than just
school
subjects thereby developing broader knowledge.
For example
,
this
lockdown which made everyone restricted to
house
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the house
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, allowed children to learn various things
such
as coding, marketing and art opened opportunities for them to earn by freelancing. To sum up, it proved to be beneficial as well.
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