Write about the following topic: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a presumption that it is advantageous to study with peers in a class physically rather than in a virtual environment at home. I partially agree
to
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with
this
statement because there are both merits and demerits for this
scenario which I will be discussing further
.
To begin
with, the major advantage of studying offline is it enhances social life. Firstly
, being surrounded by people with diverse cultures and mindsets would make us ready to adapt with time
. Moreover
, this
would make significant developments in the kids professional life as well. Secondly
, it develops time
management skills as the kid has to stick to a specific time
routine. As the child needs to wake up at a specific time
as he needs to attend school
at certain
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a certain
time
. Further
, in school
they maintain a schedule for class hours and break timings. Add a comma
,school
For instance
, my cousin who is a 14-year-old used to be very disciplined with his studies but covid
pandemic has messed his routine as he need not be physically present in Correct article usage
the covid
school
this
led to time wasting
. Add a hyphen
time-wasting
Therefore
, offline schools though does
not seem to make a magnificent Change the verb form
do
differences
it overall builds child’s diverse skills.
On contrary, Correct the article-noun agreement
difference
online-education
is the most happening thing these days. Due to the fact thatCorrect your spelling
online education
,
it brings comfort as they need not wake up early in order to get ready and travel to Remove the comma
apply
institute
. Add an article
the institute
In addition
to this
, it would not waste the most valuable resource that is
Time
. Followed by this
, it also
provides possibility
to study various things rather than just Add an article
the possibility
a possibility
school
subjects thereby developing broader knowledge. For example
, this
lockdown which made everyone restricted to house
, allowed children to learn various things Add an article
the house
such
as coding, marketing and art opened opportunities for them to earn by freelancing. To sum up, it proved to be beneficial as well.Submitted by manojvamc on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion