Is has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than benefits to the community and the young adult themselves?
Communities and non-profit establishments to assist needy as well as homeless individuals are many in every country. And some of these
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volunteer workers, who help to them in their free time, are really needed to these establishments. Now I will talk about the disadvantages and the advantages of doing voluntary jobs for themselves and these Linking Words
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Firstly
, the main favour of having the kind of staff in the Linking Words
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is that most voluntary working mode is likely to free of salary and fee. So, the communities can save their budget, and spend on other essential things Use synonyms
instead
of paying salary. I think, most employees who work in the Linking Words
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institutions are able to exist because of human resource cost saving in my opinion.
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, the core advantage of being a voluntary employee in the Linking Words
charity
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, I participated in a donation event 2 years ago and that day I meet needy Linking Words
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who need support. So, it seems that young adults should spend their free time on more options to do Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...