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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Studying in private schools became a new trend in
21-st
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 century. It is obvious, that
educational
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 system has been improved, but some aspects have not changed over time, as taxes for state education. For some particular
reasons
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 parents of those children who attend elite schools believe, that they should be free of paying taxes. While I understand
this
 viewpoint, I do not entirely share it.
First
 of all,
learning
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 process in state institutions completely depends on government support. It is not a big secret, that
this
 support relates
on
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 taxes, which are
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 of each citizen. All of
as
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us
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 pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use, but does it mean that we should not be required to pay? If
this
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than
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level
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the level
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 of education in public institutions would decline, without sponsoring
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 of schooling
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 has no chance to survive.
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, providing all teenagers with an opportunity to study complimentary quite beneficial for society. It is important to have
qualified
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 nation,
unfortunately
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 some families can not afford highly
payed
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 education for their
offsprings
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. Many
of
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celebrities are
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examples of
whose
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those
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 who was brought up in poor families,
for
instance
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 Cristiano Ronaldo.
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, the government give him
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 ability to study in
sport
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 school, as we can see, nowadays Cristiano is one of the most successful
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 in
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history. To sum
up
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 everything that has been stated so far, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for
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those
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whose
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those
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 who choose private schools.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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