Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Nowadays
parents
in my hometown
parents
buy whatever they want and anything
what
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they ask
to
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their
children
. But, is it a good direction to bring up
children
and what results could
this
style of parent’s education have for
children
as they get older? Overall,
this
is really happen
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very often and everybody encountered
with
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it, but not everyone thinks about
consequences
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of
this
.
Firstly
, you will cultivate wrong qualities in the child. Buying wishes for every their whim. It makes them arrogant and will demand it from you.
In addition
, they become spoiled and feel like they are better than other
children
. So, considering all of the above, we can say that
this
is a bad way of raising
children
. To avoid all these problems, we should crawl with the carrot and stick method or other parenting strategies that give
children
a parlous upbringing.
Secondly
, it can lead to big problems and negative consequences as
children
grow up. Wrong qualities like arrogance and impudence could be a cause of problems with social activity and independence and responsibility. While you are buying a regular expensive toy
to
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you
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child because you think that it makes him happy, it’s destroying his feature.
For example
, teenagers, who got whatever they desire from their family, have no determination to achieve their goals in the future. In conclusion, don’t forget that
parents
cannot be always with them and
them
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should teach them to responsibility and self- depending to make their feature better living with basic rules as well.
This
is only possible if
parents
control it. The family members should study their kids to be well-disciplined.
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  • indulgent
  • entitlement
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