Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?

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there is a steady growth in the
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of
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becoming obese and the lack of physical fitness.
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as high-priced healthy
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membership and it will be constructed TV shows which constitute the cooking of healthy
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to solute
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problem. There are a plethora of fibres and fitness clubs for developing a healthy
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of
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healthy
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and subscriptions to the
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are very expensive.
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eat unhealthy
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due to their insufficient time, health unawareness and cost, the fast-
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is cheap than good
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. In meantime, in
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clubs,
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have to pay even more money for the
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and for the trainer.
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, from my own ,experience my friend prefers a healthy
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and he spends three times more money on
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and the
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than others.
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proves that in our city a healthy
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costs a lot of money. The possible solution for
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problem is making a TV show about cooking healthy
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at home. Most
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cook
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for their family thanks to culinary TV programs which consider ways of cooking various types of
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. It is necessary to increase the
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of cooking shows that teach
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how to cook healthy
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at home, both good and cheap.
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, there is a program "Eat and lose weight!" on the TNT channel where the host of the show calls on a professional chef and a nutritionist for help, and they come up with how to make a cutlet or a chocolate cake from a very high-calorie to cutlet or a chocolate cake, but half the calories. To conclude, in
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modern world the
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of
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who have an unhealthy
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increase suddenly day by day, because high-cost of the good
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and
gym
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membership. The possible solution for
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is to increase the
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of television shows for cooking healthy
foods
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