Over the recent decades, advanced technology has become an integral part
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’s life. There are some individuals
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that
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modern gadgets
as
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mobile phone, laptop, a computer makes a person life easy and comfortable. While
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argue that, these innovations create a gap between families and
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forthcoming ,paragraph I will explain both notions and
give my point of view.
To commence with, the predominant reason is that, due to improvement of devices and internet service
can easily communicate with their long-distance relatives,
who live in a foreign land or far away from home. Unlike in the past , it so was difficult to connect with their dear and near one. But in the present time, with the help of new electrical devices and ,internet a person can be in touch with other
in a minute.
, they can
find their long lost
and again connect with them. For
, Oxford University publish a report, where they found,
are more connected and happy because they can in touch with their close-one anytime.
, they, feel less
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than before.
On the other side, there are some
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it increases distance with a loved one. Perhaps, the reason is that
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especially the young
are very fond of using laptops, phone and most of the time they spend on the screen which makes them less social.
, they are unable to make
and connect with the outer world.
,
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are busy so that, they could not spend time with family. For that reason, they communicate with them through virtual services. So, the warmth of family and family bonding are going
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away.
To conclude with, in my point of view, using new innovations not only brings society together but
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helps to make a beautiful society.