Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant example if necessary.
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a price
people
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money oriented
. In Add a hyphen
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such
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are
explained in the following paragraph.
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is
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, the content of Linking Words
work
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life
to live a good Use synonyms
life
. By Use synonyms
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this
I mean that, if we love the Add a comma
,this
work
in which we are interested that gives us more happiness and Use synonyms
also
our performance will increase eventually, which will help us to grow in professional career. Linking Words
For example
, the founder of Facebook, Linking Words
he
started his profession with low income and gradually he is one of the most famous and richest persons in the modern era, Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
is because he was very passionate about his Linking Words
work
, and he is more satisfied with it. Use synonyms
Further
, It will help us to be relaxed and Linking Words
Correct your spelling
calm
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which is very essential in the latest development of technology. Which will help us to be Correct your spelling
calm
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Change preposition
On
right
path.
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the right
Second
, Linking Words
people
who are satisfied with their Use synonyms
work
will have enough time to develop other activities. In a recent study shown by the Use synonyms
times
of India, many Change the capitalization
Times
people
who are enjoying their Use synonyms
work
will Use synonyms
also
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has
time to spend on their personal interest activities by which they can develop other activities. Change the verb form
have
For example
, the Captain of India cricket team, M.S Dhoni, because he was pleased with his Linking Words
work
Use synonyms
life
, He has shown his passion in his playing cricket which has made him Use synonyms
to
earn more. Change the verb form
apply
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addition
it will make them Add a comma
,addition
to
choose their passion as their career which they will happy in doing it.
In conclusion, Some Change the verb form
apply
they
prefer to get more money than their personal satisfaction. Correct pronoun usage
apply
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,
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apply
Use synonyms
work
Add a hyphen
work-life
life
balance is vital in order to be Use synonyms
creativity
and help us to spend some time with our passion.Replace the word
creative
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