Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant example if necessary.
In
this
world where everything is has price
, Add an article
a price
people
are becoming more money oriented
. In Add a hyphen
money-oriented
such
a situation, it is vital for people
to choose which is more important. I disagree with the given statement and my view are
explained in the following paragraph.
Change the verb form
is
First
, the content of work
is more important in one’s life
to live a good life
. By this
I mean that, if we love the Add a comma
,this
work
in which we are interested that gives us more happiness and also
our performance will increase eventually, which will help us to grow in professional career. For example
, the founder of Facebook, he
started his profession with low income and gradually he is one of the most famous and richest persons in the modern era, Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
is because he was very passionate about his work
, and he is more satisfied with it. Further
, It will help us to be relaxed and Correct your spelling
calm
clam
which is very essential in the latest development of technology. Which will help us to be Correct your spelling
calm
In
Change preposition
On
right
path.
Correct article usage
the right
Second
, people
who are satisfied with their work
will have enough time to develop other activities. In a recent study shown by the times
of India, many Change the capitalization
Times
people
who are enjoying their work
will also
has
time to spend on their personal interest activities by which they can develop other activities. Change the verb form
have
For example
, the Captain of India cricket team, M.S Dhoni, because he was pleased with his work
life
, He has shown his passion in his playing cricket which has made him to
earn more. Change the verb form
apply
In
addition
it will make them Add a comma
,addition
to
choose their passion as their career which they will happy in doing it.
In conclusion, Some Change the verb form
apply
they
prefer to get more money than their personal satisfaction. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, I believe that,
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apply
work
Add a hyphen
work-life
life
balance is vital in order to be creativity
and help us to spend some time with our passion.Replace the word
creative
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