Computer games are becoming very popular among children of all ages and nationalities. Parents say they are concerned because these games have little educational value and many harmful effects. Do you agree or disagree?
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the verb to be should be in the bare infinitive form. Consider removing to from in front of this verb.
The word creativity doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that effect may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The word eye sight seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The word eye sight seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
It seems that glass may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example