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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, smoking has been judged by some individuals which should completely be prohibited in
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public areas , as it totally
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both users and surrounded people .
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 I agree that smoking may cause
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health issues , I do not think that definite banning of smoking in all areas is not the best solution.
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plenty of social health problems .
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 would mean that lung received those particles in the exceed standard level could gradually be damage, contribute to the possibility of lung cancer
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, studies consistently reveal children who spend more time with parents who
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 , indicating a high level of respiratory function , compared to those that dedicate no smoking.
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. Them To sum up, even though there are clear benefits of ensuring , I do believe that . In future. `should consider for both
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