Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibility, while others feel that there are important external factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays , most people argue , to be happy is mainly the duty of a
human-being
where Correct your spelling
human being
other
believes that there are some other Correct pronoun usage
others
cruicial
points leading to Correct your spelling
crucial
the
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apply
happiness
. In my opinion , Although
its the responsibilty
of an individual to be heady , some other factors are Correct your spelling
responsibility
also
playing a vital role in the
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apply
happiness
.
To begin
with , the person
should be strong enough . As if anything bad happens in his life
like if he does not get a good result of his long hard work , its
the Correct your spelling
it's
person
duty to tackle with
that situation and does not let that situation Change preposition
apply
to
be heavy on himself because he has the option to try again . Fix the infinitive
apply
In addition
, the individual should have control on
his emotions . Even though there are many emotional moments in his Change preposition
over
life
where it is not important to be sad , he does not have to pay attention to those silly things and try to be busy in
his own development .
Change preposition
with
On the other hand
, there are some other points which are important for happiness
. Situations in the
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apply
life
. For
example
if a Add a comma
,example
person
tried a lot even after his failure and he is able to achieve that goal or job but when it is time to join , accident
is Add an article
the accident
an accident
occure
and he Correct your spelling
occur
lose
somebody parts now what he will do ? How he can be happy ? So the situation must be good to be happy . Change the verb form
loses
Family
should be supportive . As Correct article usage
The family
family
is playing a Add an article
the family
cruicial
role in Correct your spelling
crucial
Correct your spelling
everyone's
everyones
Change to a genitive case
everyone's
life
, they have to support their child in his doing because if guardian stop their offspring to doing what he want
to do or he is doing Change the verb form
wants
then
it really affects his happiness
.
In conclusion , however
, the person
should be strong enough , situations in the life
and support by the family is playing a vital role in his life
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