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Some peopel think that one world government is better than national governments. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#peopel #world #government #governments
The layout illustrates the information regarding the existing site layout plan and
next
year
 development plan of the Southwest airport. Overall, the current airport will be modified
next
year
 with expanding the number of
gates
 and infrastructure development of departure and arrival
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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. For the moment passengers are walking towards
gates
 on foot, and there are only 8
gates
 there. In
next
year
 the same
area
 will be expanded to 18
gates
, and travellers can reach each
gates
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 by proposed sky train facility. Departure lounge will be improved in
next
year
 with extra bag Shop, and existing shops that located after security passport control will be removed while extra departure entrance added. On the right-hand ,side arrivals will be added extra entrance in future while expanding the
area
 to accommodate new café before the passport control customs while new ATM placed
next
 to it.
Although
 the expanded
area
 will be used of car hire service in
next
year
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global peace
  • uniform policies
  • conflicts
  • boundaries
  • resources
  • efficient global responses
  • crises
  • pandemics
  • climate change
  • unified strategy
  • resource allocation
  • social justice
  • redistributing resources
  • extreme poverty
  • inequality
  • cultural diversity
  • global governance
  • tyranny
  • abuse of power
  • centralized authority
  • checks and balances
  • logistical challenges
  • implementation
  • governance
  • laws
  • languages
  • cultural practices
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