It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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The development of technology has made far distance

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dictation

destination

and travelling possible. While many positive factors can be founded, the negative influence behind

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not be

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neglected

. There are several reasons why it is good to visit some

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, many species in far-ended

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could rarely be seen by humans, like penguins, polar bears and so on. Due to their living habitats, only when we travel to the South Pole are we able to see some penguins while polar bears can only be founded in the North Pole

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, as few people have visited far distance

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of things to be discovered scientifically and historically. Breakthroughs can easily be made as well as researches and experiments could be conducted extensively.

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, for those avid travellers who may feel tired of usual destinations,

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a trip

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to unusual and

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places may arouse their interests and bring them

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excitement

and fun.

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, drawbacks inevitably exist. Frequent visits by humans often do harm to an area. Humans sometimes leave rubbish or

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destroy

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the ecosystem

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by making

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or drop litter.

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, every year many hot tourism spots in China are reported to be filled with rubbish everywhere and have to be shut down to clean.

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, unknown

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and diseases may be detected in those

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which human beings have never met before. It means that most of them are now uncontainable and haven't been fully

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studied

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. Experts and tourists who have been there may be infected

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unconsciously

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spread fastly among people when they come back.

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a new kind of epidemic may occur. In conclusion, there are both strengths and weak points to consider on remoted travelling and measures should be taken for its better development.

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Topic Vocabulary:

remote natural environment
scientific research
climate change
environmental preservation
economic benefits
conservation efforts
habitat disruption
pollution
cultural disruption
indigenous populations
commercialization
safety risks
personal enrichment
ecosystems
awareness
appreciation for nature

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Your opinion

Task 2 Many people claim that ordering food is a better option than preparing it themselves. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solution

In many countries, people think owning a home is more important than renting one. Why is this the case? Do you think it’s a positive or negative situation?