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The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some
people
 believe that the efficient functioning of
society
 relies on
rules
 and
laws
, so the
society
 would not operate well if the human were free to do whatever they wanted. But other
people
 do not think so. From my standpoint, I reckon that
society
 will not be operated if
people
 were free to do whatever they wanted. If everyone were free to do whatever they wanted, no
rules
 or
laws
 to regulate the
society
 which means there is chaos in
society
, so the
society
 would not
function
 well. To be specific, if
people
 do not want to obey the
rules
 or
laws
,
such
 as running the red light or mugging.
This
 could cause huge chaos in
society
, the citizen maybe live in the fear, so it has a negative impact on
the
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society
. If
people
 like to do anything they want without restriction,
people
 may not trust others easily, it is
also
 a horrible influence on
the
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civilisation. If
people
 do not trust each other, they may not tend to help other
people
, because they believe that the situation is fake, so individuals could lose their sympathy, in the
end
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 it will cause
significant
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 effect on
society
function
.
On the other hand
,
society
is not
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is not functioning
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function
 well only because
people
 do not obey the
rules
 or
laws
, it may
has
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have
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 other reasons.
Such
 as if the government does not services
people
 well, the
society
 operation is not well either. So the world may not operate well because of
others
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 things, not only if
people
 were free to do whatever they wanted. In conclusion,
Although
the
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society
function
 may
caused
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be caused
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 by
others
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other
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 things, it still
be
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is
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 influenced that if everyone were free to do whatever they wanted.
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