Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Some people suggest that the circumstances of a crime, and the reasons for committing it should be taken into consideration when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sentencing for those found guilty of
crimes
presents a difficult challenge because justice must be seen to
done
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for both victims and perpetrators. Mandatory sentencing ensures that the same sentence is handed out for the same
crime
;
however
, judges lose the ability to adjust
sentences
and cannot take into account factors
such
as age and the possibility of rehabilitation. In
this
essay, the consequences of mandatory sentencing will be discussed. Mandatory sentencing has the advantage that everyone is aware of exactly the sentence they can expect if found guilty of a particular
crime
.
However
, since people who commit
crimes
are often poorly educated and may not consider the consequences of their actions when they commit a
crime
,
this
approach may offer little benefit. Removing the ability of judges to adjust
sentences
on the basis of the circumstances of a
crime
may
also
lead to injustice as it assumes that any two people who commit the same
crime
have the same level of moral culpability.
For example
, someone who murders in order to prevent suffering is morally different to someone who murders a stranger at random. Applying the same
sentences
in
such
disparate cases clearly would not serve the interests of either justice or the wider community.
In addition
, it may be appropriate to give a young person who has committed a
crime
a lighter sentence in order to give them the opportunity to change their behaviour and become
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productive and law-abiding
citizen
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.
In contrast
, a person who is older and has committed many
crimes
should receive a heavier penalty as they are more likely to
reoffend
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re-offend
in future and heavier
sentences
are needed to protect the community. In summary, mandatory sentencing may lead to injustice because the same
crime
may be committed for very different reasons.
In addition
, a person’s history and the opportunity for rehabilitation should
also
be taken into consideration when deciding
sentences
for those convicted of committing
crimes
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