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In today’s very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer.

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It is widely believed that an employee requires multiple
skills
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 to be successful in a career.
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However
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 I believe that professional
skills
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 are more significant than social
skills
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. In
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 essay, I will support my view with examples.
To begin
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 with, a worker needs sufficient
skills
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 to pursue a good job. One should understand that all highly skilled jobs need a minimum university qualification and its basic eligibility criteria for that profession.
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, doctors who don't possess the right qualifications are a serious threat to a patient's life. In
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 case, social
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 might not help without preliminary knowledge about the job. And
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 teachers who don't have the right amount of knowledge on the subject cannot deliver the appropriate content to students.
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, social
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also
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 play a vital role in one's profession. An employee who cannot get along with co-employees develops a lot of stress because of the toxic environment. When professional stress and mental stress are kept aside employees can focus on productivity. It can help the individual to grow in his career with a positive attitude and being innovative. Aforementioned a doctor with good qualifications who cannot communicate with patients in a nice manner doesn't leave good feedback. And tutor's content is of waste if it cannot reach the students in the right manner. In conclusion, one needs to admit that these are two critical
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 for an employee.
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, when it comes to productivity, I consider professional
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 to stand a degree above social
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 and social
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 are natural for any human being who lives in a society.
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