City living 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

In the age of modernization and globalization, there are more and more people flocking to big cities, seeking

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a more comfortable

life

.

However

, whether being a citizen is a good choice?

This

essay is aimed at discussing

this

question before giving an honest answer for it. We will talk about the advantages to start with.

First

, overpopulation results in a lot of serious social problems,

such

as

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lacking

of

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materials, medical services or

umemployment

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unemployment

employment

. A recent survey pointed out that 30

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percents

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of those who

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to start a new

life

in the

city

do not have a stable job. They can not even pay for food or food, and

as a result

, they will go back to their hometown sooner or later.

Second

, that too many residents living in a limited space will have a huge impact on the environment there. They are cities that are suffering from a multitude of kinds of pollution.

For example

, in Shang Hai, people there even have to wear protective

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when going out due to lethal air pollution.

Nevertheless

,

a

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life

in the

city

can bring about a big number of advantages.

Firstly

, it is really a promising place for a good job, which mean a prosperous

life

as long as you are excellent enough. The monthly salary of a mechanical worker, or a teacher in urban areas can be 10 times as much as the income of a farmer in the rural ones.

In addition

, those who settled in the

city

relishes immense infrastructures ranging from good roads,

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hours

electricity

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, school, and other technological advancements. These make living easier and

also

revolutionize communication within the metropolis. In conclusion, the opportunities that living in the

city

can provide you with

outweighs

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the difficulties. Having a

life

there means you have to make much more effort in order to have a position there.