The average standard of people health is likely to lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Recently, there has been a lot of discussion about

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and whether it is going to improve or not. In my opinion, I think the

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will become

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unhealthier

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than they are now. There are many reasons that support the idea of becoming unhealthy in

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, one reason is that of

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People

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tend to eat more fast

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nowadays. They tend to eat sweets and chocolates whenever they want.

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appears to be because

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are busier now than they used to be. So,

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don't have a chance to cook or learn the art of cookery.

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, having a lot of unhealthy

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can lead to obesity and it could be a serious

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issue in the

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. Another reason is that

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is developing

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. Young

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enjoy buying new gadgets and the latest devices.

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has a negative impact on their

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, especially when they enjoy video games. Spending long hours looking at a screen leads to bad eyesight and obesity as well. Yet another reason is that

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laziness

is a big issue. Different forms of

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might disappear in the

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because

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don't like sports.

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people

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prefer spending most of their time on the internet and the internet is growing every single day. Other

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might disagree and say that

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will improve in the

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. They believe that new sports and new ways to exercise will appear in the

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, I don't think it can happen since the majority of

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spend less time outdoors.

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, other

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believe that

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will try and help

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improve their

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, there have been some games released on the Wii console that makes

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exercise but

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is developing more in a negative way.

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, more phone industries are developing new applications

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and today’s generation likes to

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every trend.

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prevents

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to go outside to exercise. They

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to spend more time on the internet downloading new programmes or reading gossips about celebrities.

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affects

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health

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badly. In conclusion, I believe that

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health

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is affected negatively by fast

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technology

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and sports and it will be a problem in the

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Standard of health
2. Average
3. Lower
4. Future
5. Aging population
6. Chronic diseases
7. Sedentary lifestyle
8. Lack of exercise
9. Poor dietary habits
10. Environmental pollution
11. Technological advancements
12. Impact on health

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