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The average standard of people health is likely to lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Recently, there has been a lot of discussion about
health
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 and whether it is going to improve or not. In my opinion, I think the
people
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 will become unhealthier in
future
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 than they are now. There are many reasons that support the idea of becoming unhealthy in
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.
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, one reason is that of
food
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.
People
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 tend to eat more fast
food
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 nowadays. They tend to eat sweets and chocolates whenever they want.
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 appears to be because
people
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 are busier now than they used to be. So,
people
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 don't have a chance to cook or learn the art of cookery.
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, having a lot of unhealthy
food
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 can lead to obesity and it could be a serious
health
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 issue in the
future
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. Another reason is that
technology
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 is developing every day. Young
people
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 enjoy buying new gadgets and the latest devices.
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 has a negative impact on their
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, especially when they enjoy video games. Spending long hours looking at a screen leads to bad eyesight and obesity as well. Yet another reason is that laziness is a big issue. Different forms of
exercise
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 might disappear in the
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 because
people
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 don't like sports.
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,
people
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 prefer spending most of their time on the internet and the internet is growing every single day. Other
people
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 might disagree and say that
health
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 will improve in the
future
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. They believe that new sports and new ways to
exercise
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 will appear in the
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.
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, I don't think it can happen since the majority of
people
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 spend less time outdoors.
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, other
people
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 believe that
technology
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 will try and help
people
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 improve their
health
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, there have been some games released on the Wii console that makes
people
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exercise
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 but
technology
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 is developing more in a negative way.
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, more phone industries are developing new applications every day and today’s generation likes to follow every trend.
This
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 prevents
people
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 to go outside to
exercise
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. They like to spend more time on the internet downloading new programmes or reading gossips about celebrities.
This
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 affects
people
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's
health
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 badly. In conclusion, I believe that
people
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's
health
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 is affected negatively by fast
food
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,
technology
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 and sports and it will be a problem in the
future
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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