Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Nowadays,
besides
the controversy
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controversial
waste
from industries, the trash produced from home accounted for most of huge
portion. Add an article
the huge
However
, some people
state that this
sources waste
is not totally recycled and different Change preposition
of waste
of
kinds of pollution is directed to Change preposition
apply
this
issue. In order to reduce amount
of unrecycled domestic Add an article
the amount
waste
, some people
said that authorities must enact laws to mandate citizens to do recycling. In my opinion, I totally agree with this
idea, because people
are inherently lazy to do some things like reduced therefore
it need
a law to obligate everyone must reduce their rubbish.
Some Change the verb form
needs
people
have awareness of recycling’s pivotal while others pay no attention about
the negative effect Change preposition
to
from
domestic Change preposition
of
waste
. However
, when a law created
and have a punishment for Add a missing verb
is created
who
does not obey, recycling will be a habit and Correct pronoun usage
those who
people
will find it nuisance
when have individuals do not carry out the regulation. Add an article
a nuisance
For example
, there was punishment for someone litter rubbish on road, if have someone do not obey they have to pay a fine about 1000 sgd
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said
and
sad
Therefore
, we rarely find a
garbage on the Singaporean’s road, Remove the article
apply
this
trend exert
a positive impact on Change the verb form
exerts
the
our environment.
Another reason only government can offer a way to increase recycling is that some Remove the article
apply
people
do not concern about the environment
issues even there are some Replace the word
environmental
people
have
no cognition about that. While who have awareness of recycling are Correct pronoun usage
who have
minority
, do not capable of changing the Add an article
a minority
the minority
social’s
habit. Replace the word
society’s
Furthermore
, if government enact a law it definitely
able to reduce pollution, as results Add a missing verb
is definitely
less
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fewer
people
become sick or have issues related to respiratory. Therefore
, authorities can reduce a
huge of money provide for Correct article usage
the
hospital
, medicines or health services.
In conclusion, the governments need Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
encourage
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to encourage
people
to recycle in their homes, creating new laws, in order to help everyone to change their habits and understand that recycling is an obligation. And government even
able to decrease Add a missing verb
was even
a
mass of money for health problems or nursing Correct article usage
the
home
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homes
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite