Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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waste
from industries, the trash produced from home accounted for most of
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portion.
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, some
people
state that
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is not totally recycled and different
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kinds of pollution is directed to
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of unrecycled domestic
waste
, some
people
said that authorities must enact laws to mandate citizens to do recycling. In my opinion, I totally agree with
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idea, because
people
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a law to obligate everyone must reduce their rubbish. Some
people
have awareness of recycling’s pivotal while others pay no attention
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domestic
waste
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does not obey, recycling will be a habit and
people
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when have individuals do not carry out the regulation.
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, there was punishment for someone litter rubbish on road, if have someone do not obey they have to pay a fine about 1000
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garbage on the Singaporean’s road,
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a positive impact on
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our environment. Another reason only government can offer a way to increase recycling is that some
people
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issues even there are some
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no cognition about that. While who have awareness of recycling are
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, do not capable of changing the
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habit.
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able to reduce pollution, as results
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people
become sick or have issues related to respiratory.
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huge of money provide for
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, medicines or health services. In conclusion, the governments need
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people
to recycle in their homes, creating new laws, in order to help everyone to change their habits and understand that recycling is an obligation. And government
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able to decrease
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mass of money for health problems or nursing
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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