Education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement, and to what extent?

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Education
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role in society. Some people hold the
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Education
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must be free of cost for every person in the world.
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, it helps to improve
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of people, yet, competition is increasing required extra fees.
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with, there are several reasons which support my point of
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legitimate.
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, if
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is able to get
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education
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free,
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it will improve the
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literacy
rate of the country.
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, improve
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literacy
rate declines the violence rate.
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, illiteracy is the main cause of unemployment, due to many
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jobs required a degree.
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, the Theme study has been shown that in the UK
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till secondary school is without any fee and nearly 90
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citizens
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of citizens
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are educated. On the opposite side, competition is growing day by day. Some courses are much expensive and need more hard work, if
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provides
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free of cost,
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it will decrease the importance of
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because students will not take it seriously. To justify it, to get a job
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person need to work strictly on it and spend a lot of money on it.
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, it soars the expenditure of government, because there are many other issues that they need to be tackled
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as crime, health facilities.
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also
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mandatory to give safe and secure life to society. To conclude, while the free
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charges
education
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is essential to make the world
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place to live;
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, it declines the importance of study
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some extent.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lifelong education
  • continual learning
  • adapt
  • changing technologies
  • societal norms
  • cognitive function
  • cognitive decline
  • personal development
  • self-improvement
  • formal education
  • navigate
  • emphasis
  • pressure
  • contentment
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