A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
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claim that
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should enjoy the same treatments as humans and should not
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or used to carry out experiments, while I personally agree with others who believe that
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can have
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satisfied some of our necessary requirements
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as meals and research on medicines. It makes sense since the claim for
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to enjoy the same rights as
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, as we are both vivid creatures, living on the same earth, breathing the same air, greatly shows humanitarian spirit. The kindness of
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and the pity to those
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which are weak in the ecosystem and
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chain
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saved countless
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’ lives, even brought some species back from the risk of extinction several times throughout history. We have
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reserves, zoos, pet clinics, all prove the idea that
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can coexist with
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being
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, considering
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debate only from humanity is not objective, since the basis of
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of
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is not humanity at all, which is,
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, the strong survive, and the weak die. The top position of
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chain
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naturally offers
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the power to determine other creatures’ life or death. It seems inhuman and disrespectful to treat
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for our own intents without considering what their tomorrow will be, but it is reasonable for keeping
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top of
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since
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ensures the continuation of the human being. Even though
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are
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strong and dominant on the earth, we are not indefectible, which means we need to find approaches to cope with new diseases like COVID-19 and uncertainty of
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,
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and global warming. The tests of new medicines and methods require
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and
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if the previous tests come out to be safe.
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is obviously more humane and responsible than letting
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be tested in the
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place.
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, eating other
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is justified in itself for
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as
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follows the law of
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and
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, forbidding
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to have
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as meals is unreasonable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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