A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The problem of
animals
is a hot topic at present. There are more
people
wanting to get along with
animals
peacefully while others have contrary opinions that
animals
should be contributed to the needs of
human
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such
as food or experiments. From my perspective, the
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later
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one is what I agree with, to sacrifice
animals
for the survival of
human
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.
Although
some
people
will treat
animals
as their friends which may have equal or even higher
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in their mind than human friends or families, there are
also
some troubles accompanying
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this
.
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, the equivalent
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as
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other
people
may cause the formation of jealousy in their
mind
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which can lead to negative results.
For example
, a friend of someone can become green with envy to the pet dog because it can receive more attention and care from its master, and
then
this
human friend may catch the dog, torturing it or even kill it.
Moreover
,
animals
with equivalence in
statues
with
human
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need loads of care from
its
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master and
this
may interfere
the
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original life of
this
human.
For instance
, a student may lose his passion to study as he is always attracted to his fond animal, whatever it is a pet or an animal on television. For the material need of
human
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, it is necessary for
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human
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to kill, eat or research.
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, despite that the vegetable protein is more beneficial to
human
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body,
people
still choose to eat meat due to its delicious taste. There is a survey about
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diet of
people
carried in China indicating that most
people
prefer eating pork, beef, lamb and chicken and so on to obtain energy during meals rather than from vegetables.
Furthermore
, experiments on studying secrets in
animals
are supposed to be carried out because
human
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want to know the unknowing things in other creatures, their purposes not only are curiosities but
also
are finding out the revolution of
animals
or some useful substances which can benefit the whole humanity. In conclusion, the sacrifice of
animals
is unavoidable to be utilized by
human
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and
the
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equal
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statues
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between
human
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and
animal
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cannot be achieved yet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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