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Investment plan With the goal of solving our current problems and enabling Dino Conti to become a competitive international business, we propose a $3 million investment.

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Investment
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 plan With the goal of solving our current problems and enabling Dino Conti to become a competitive international business, we propose a $3 million
investment
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. Strategy and implementation of the
company
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's project after being The Board of Directors approved the
investment
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 plan in steps: the
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 thing we need to do is promote the
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's image, so we recommend that the
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 increase the advertising budget. That way, we will promote our image not only in the United States but
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 in Asia and Europe, especially in China and Russia. These are all very potential markets.
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, it is important to distribute more stores. It helps increase sales and profits for us and will get more customers to know about our brand. The end is the acquisition of the
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's biggest competitor.
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, the
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 can reduce competition, expand business activities and gain a foothold in the international market. Project value reported from planning department: The proposed increase in advertising budget by $500,000, multi-store distribution by more than $500,000, the largest amount of
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 the
company
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 spent to buy a major competitor $ 2,000,000. The business planning department will arrange the
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 plan progress report and will submit it to the board of directors to check the monthly progress on
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 project and wait for the results to be obtained.

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