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In detail, the amount of undergrounded rubbish accounted for 22% for the Republic of Korea whereas it made up 55% in Sweden and a huge 82% in the UK being the highest percen

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The three pie charts depict the percentage of different treatments of waste
products
 in three different countries:
Republic
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 of
Korea
,
Sweden
 and
United
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 Kingdom. Overall, it can be seen that, in Europe, the biggest proportion of dangerous wastes were dealt undergrounding those
products
, while in Asia recycling was the main activity for these items. In detail, the amount of undergrounded rubbish accounted
to
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 22%
for
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 the Republic of
Korea
, whereas it made up 55% in
Sweden
 and a huge 82% in
UK
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the UK
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 being the highest percentage in the way wastes were treated in Europe. 9% and 20% for
Korea
 and
Sweden
, respectively. Incineration involved only 9% of Korean waste
products
, while it accounted
to
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 20% in
Sweden
 and only
to
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2% in
UK
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 being the least used way to destroy useless
products
. Recycling was the most used operation to deal with rubbish in the Republic of
Korea
 while it made up only a quarter in
Sweden
. Chemical treatment and dumping at sea accounted
both
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 to 8% in the UK, while no one of them was practised to deal with dangerous waste
products
 in
the
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Sweden
 and in the R.of
Korea
.
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