some people believe that learning a foreign language is a difficult task .what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language .what is the best way to overcome them. explain and include your personal experience or knowledge of this problem.

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There are two different opinions about universities performance. One group of people
belive
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that, in academic institutes,
students
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have to prepare for their future, whereas, other
view
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views
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tell that, undergraduates needed to
leran
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learn
academic subjects which are beneficial. In my perspective,
university
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the university
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is a good place for both learning and
practicing
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. On one hand, It is argued that in colleages, pupils have
learnd
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learned
learnt
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theoretical
subjects,
thus
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, they can do whatever they read in their
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workplaces
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. In
this
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way, several problems will
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because
amateour
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amateur
workers don't have enough experience. Another drawback of
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view is that
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some mistakes are really expensive. In
competitive
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a competitive
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world, if a company didn't work properly, it would be possible
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company
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lose their place in the market.
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,
last
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week, Amazon company miss
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large amount of their profit because of a small mistake that happened in the USA.
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, many humans believed that
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universities should give some space and
facitilies
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facilities
to their
students
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to learn many skills which are
usefull
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useful
for their future careers. From
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a society
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society
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perspective, academic institutes have got
high
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range of amenities and sources that graduates can use and become professional in their field of study.
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, they can find
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job
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jobs
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and get ready for
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them
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. It is undeniable that
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practical courses deter employers from
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mistakes.
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, it is really essential that
doctores
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doctors
prepare for their job before they start treating patients. If they use
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drogs
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drugs
, it is more likely that
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they
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the
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patients will
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. I strongly believe that
,
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universities work whole two main purposes,
first
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,
students
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have to learn
theorical
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theoretical
methods,
Second
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, they have to develop their knowledge in laboratories because making
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mistakes
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in
academic
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the academic
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atmosphere is much
more
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apply
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cheaper than in job places. To conclude, there are two main ideas about university's goal, each has many benefits and drawbacks but I personally believe that
,
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preparing
students
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for their future career is quiet important than teaching them
theorical
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theoretical
subjects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Phonetics
  • Syntax
  • Conjugation
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Cognates
  • Immersion
  • Fluency
  • Pedagogy
  • Linguistic competence
  • Mnemonics
  • Language acquisition
  • Pronunciation drills
  • Conversation partners
  • Language barrier
  • Bilingualism
  • Multilingualism
  • Accent reduction
  • Comprehension
  • Language proficiency
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