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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
people
 are having a lot of health issues because they are consuming fast
food
 too often. In many
countries
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 the numbers of unhealthy
people
 are rising significantly and
therefore
 some
people
 think that the government should implement a higher
tax
 on
this
food
 category.
Although
 I agree that the government should increase the
tax
 to reduce the consumption of fast
food
, I
also
 believe that encouraging
people
 to eat healthy
food
 will be an effective method. On one hand, implementing a higher
tax
 on fast
food
 will reduce its consumption. The higher the
tax
, the more expensive it will be to purchase these
food
 items for the majority of the population.
For instance
, the middle and lower class who buy fast
food
 most of the time / because it is affordable will start purchasing it less frequently. As the majority of the population is in that income,
this
 policy will dramatically decrease the purchase of fast
food
.
Therefore
, a strategy of increased taxes will benefit the health of citizens in the long run.
On the other hand
, educating
people
 regarding healthy
food
 will
also
 decrease the consumption of fast
food
. Teaching the community the benefits of eating a balanced diet for a healthy body and mind will change their perception of fast
food
.
Moreover
, a family can still choose to dine out by just replacing fast
food
 with healthy
food
 options.
For instance
, many restaurants have options for delicious salads and freshly cooked meals that are tasty and healthy.
This
 way
people
 will become aware of their well-being. To conclude, as
people
 are eating more fast
food
 nowadays, the government should impose a higher
tax
 on these
food
 items.
However
, encouraging
people
 regarding nutritious alternatives will
also
 contribute to a decrease in health problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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