Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a matter of intense debate that art galleries and museums should not charge any kind of fee to the 
people
 and let the folks explore their history for free. Charging a small amount of entry fee isn't an idea bad at all  while letting 
people
 roaming in the gallery for free is 
also
 a risky approach. 
This
 essay will be going to discuss how the drawbacks of 
this
 issue clearly outweigh the benefits. 
to begin
 with, Most of the museums and art galleries are filled with valuable expensive items like paintings, stones , diamonds and old fabric and most of these items are thousand years old. letting 
people
 in for free might be a risky decision. 
Moreover
, there is enough in the past where   someone tried to steal or spoil these precious objects. For safety reasons, they only sell a limited number of tickets so that they can track 
people
 once they entered the property.  On the flip side, there is only   one disadvantage of 
this
 trend and that is poor masses who cannot afford the tickets has to stay away from it, especially college and university students with history as the main subject cannot afford the tickets because of high price as they already paid the enormous amount of money as a fee. Folks who want to see the museums and art galleries for free may never get a chance
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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