Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Globally,
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are subject to household work and activities that do not require a great deal of
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. It is perceived by a majority population that
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are weak when it comes to handling tough training.
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, time and again
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notion has been stike down and citizens around the world have started to recognise that equality in every kind of work is a necessity, even in the national police force and in the army, navy, and air force. In my perspective, I strongly agree that
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deserve an equal footing
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as
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in these fields. The paragraphs below will
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strengthen my opinion. Post
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equality as a concept is widely accepted.
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have been subject to many atrocities in comparison to
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.
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, the
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sitting on the high pedestals believe that if complete freedom is given to females there will be a disbalance in the population and a threat to the positions of males.
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, the females have outperformed males in many activities
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, The CEO of Pepsico Indra Nooyi
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proved the world wrong by making Pepsico a Global brand during her tenure,
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made her one of the most influential characters in the 21st Century.
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, the mental health of
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is greatly matured than that of
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. The task that they were assigned in the early days of the 20th century required much more physical and mental
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than discern.
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, data produced in the year 2011 by the Cambridge University in the
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Development Forum presented and concluded that out of 100
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only 20 were mentally and physically fit, whereas, out of 100
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80 were fit in both areas.
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proves that
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can handle situations much better than their counterparts.
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, the majority of the populace still believe that
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are not fit for roles that required a great deal of
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and especially on the battlefield due to moral reasons. Many feel that the work of
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on the battlefield is to aid the wounded and not fight along with the army.
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, it is perceived that it is
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's moral duty to protect the females and not the other way round.
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of
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,ideology
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were subject to limited roles in the working sector and the forces to protect the nation.
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, the global data published by the United Nation in 2019 laid out that only 10% of the population have
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at an equal footing in the tasks which require
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. To conclude, I strongly disagree with the opposing viewpoints and believe that
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are much stronger than observed. Albeit certain tasks required an unparamount amount of
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in
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,cases it is fair that only males are allowed but it should not be the case always. Armed and police forces are for the protection of the citizens of all genders
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equality has to be present in
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forces
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