Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Globally,
women
are subject to household work and activities that do not require a great deal of
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. It is perceived by a majority population that
women
are weak when it comes to handling tough training.
However
, time and again
this
notion has been stike down and citizens around the world have started to recognise that equality in every kind of work is a necessity, even in the national police force and in the army, navy, and air force. In my perspective, I strongly agree that
women
deserve an equal footing
such
as
men
in these fields. The paragraphs below will
further
strengthen my opinion. Post
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equality as a concept is widely accepted.
Women
have been subject to many atrocities in comparison to
men
.
Likewise
, the
men
sitting on the high pedestals believe that if complete freedom is given to females there will be a disbalance in the population and a threat to the positions of males.
Conversely
, the females have outperformed males in many activities
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as
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critical
thinking, multitasking, and but not limited to management skills.
For instance
, The CEO of Pepsico Indra Nooyi
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proved the world wrong by making Pepsico a Global brand during her tenure,
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made her one of the most influential characters in the 21st Century.
In addition
to
this
, the mental health of
women
is greatly matured than that of
men
. The task that they were assigned in the early days of the 20th century required much more physical and mental
strength
than discern.
For example
, data produced in the year 2011 by the Cambridge University in the
Women
Development Forum presented and concluded that out of 100
men
only 20 were mentally and physically fit, whereas, out of 100
women
80 were fit in both areas.
This
proves that
women
can handle situations much better than their counterparts.
On the contrary
, the majority of the populace still believe that
women
are not fit for roles that required a great deal of
strength
and especially on the battlefield due to moral reasons. Many feel that the work of
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on the battlefield is to aid the wounded and not fight along with the army.
Furthermore
, it is perceived that it is
men
's moral duty to protect the females and not the other way round.
As a result
of
this
,ideology
women
were subject to limited roles in the working sector and the forces to protect the nation.
For instance
, the global data published by the United Nation in 2019 laid out that only 10% of the population have
women
at an equal footing in the tasks which require
strength
. To conclude, I strongly disagree with the opposing viewpoints and believe that
women
are much stronger than observed. Albeit certain tasks required an unparamount amount of
strength
in
such
,cases it is fair that only males are allowed but it should not be the case always. Armed and police forces are for the protection of the citizens of all genders
thus
equality has to be present in
such
forces
also
.
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