Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Globally,
women
are subject to household work and activities that do not require a great deal of vigor
. It is perceived by a majority population that Change the spelling
vigour
women
are weak when it comes to handling tough training. However
, time and again this
notion has been stike down and citizens around the world have started to recognise that equality in every kind of work is a necessity, even in the national police force and in the army, navy, and air force. In my perspective, I strongly agree that women
deserve an equal footing such
as men
in these fields. The paragraphs below will further
strengthen my opinion.
Post mid 20th-century
equality as a concept is widely accepted. Add a hyphen
mid-20th-century
Women
have been subject to many atrocities in comparison to men
. Likewise
, the men
sitting on the high pedestals believe that if complete freedom is given to females there will be a disbalance in the population and a threat to the positions of males. Conversely
, the females have outperformed males in many activities such
as,
Remove the comma
apply
citical
thinking, multitasking, and but not limited to management skills. Correct your spelling
critical
For instance
, The CEO of Pepsico Indra Nooyi,
proved the world wrong by making Pepsico a Global brand during her tenure, Remove the comma
apply
also
it
made her one of the most influential characters in the 21st Century. Correct pronoun usage
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In addition
to this
, the mental health of women
is greatly matured than that of men
. The task that they were assigned in the early days of the 20th century required much more physical and mental strength
than discern. For example
, data produced in the year 2011 by the Cambridge University in the Women
Development Forum presented and concluded that out of 100 men
only 20 were mentally and physically fit, whereas, out of 100 women
80 were fit in both areas. This
proves that women
can handle situations much better than their counterparts.
On the contrary
, the majority of the populace still believe that women
are not fit for roles that required a great deal of strength
and especially on the battlefield due to moral reasons. Many feel that the work of woman
on the battlefield is to aid the wounded and not fight along with the army. Fix the agreement mistake
women
Furthermore
, it is perceived that it is men
's moral duty to protect the females and not the other way round. As a result
of this
,ideology women
were subject to limited roles in the working sector and the forces to protect the nation. For instance
, the global data published by the United Nation in 2019 laid out that only 10% of the population have women
at an equal footing in the tasks which require strength
.
To conclude, I strongly disagree with the opposing viewpoints and believe that women
are much stronger than observed. Albeit certain tasks required an unparamount amount of strength
in such
,cases it is fair that only males are allowed but it should not be the case always. Armed and police forces are for the protection of the citizens of all genders thus
equality has to be present in such
forces also
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