Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what you like about the uniform explain what you don’t you like about the uniform suggest how the uniform can be improved

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I am writing to you in regard to new work outfits, which were changed

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week. I am quite impressed with the stitching and new seamless pattern on the shirts of everyone which shows that regardless of our position in the company, we are a part of one team. "

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, I personally didn't like the missing

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on the left side of our shirts, where we used to put our name tags.

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was quite ironic for me how management can miss

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because that

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is not only our guide to placing name tags but

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used by lots of employees to carry work essentials like pens and so on. I would recommend that kindly in future uniform designs add a left

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like it used to be in old uniforms. In order to make it even better, the extra

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can be added to pants near the thighs. Hope my suggestion will be taken into consideration. Yours faithfully, Raj Sharma

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task achievement

Check for minor grammatical errors and typos to ensure a polished letter.

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Avoid unnecessary use of quotation marks, such as around the word 'However'.

coherence cohesion

Consider merging the last two paragraphs for better flow in your suggestions.

task achievement

You clearly stated what you like and dislike about the uniform, fulfilling the task requirements effectively.

coherence cohesion

Your letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

coherence cohesion

The polite tone and clear suggestions enhance the professionalism of your letter.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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appearance
comfort
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