Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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food

production industries rely on high

contain

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of

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sugar

or

glucose

to promote their products among consumers that cause the main reason for

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number of

health

issues all over the globe. Some argue that

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relevant authorities can implement policies to increase the price of

sugar

product

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products

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to discourage

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people use of those

foods

. I complete to agree with

this

statement, and I will express my views in

this

essay.

Firstly

, fast

food

that

contain

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contains

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high

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a high

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level of

glucose

are

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widely popular among

generation

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the generation

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in nowadays that cause the main reason to rising of blood

sugar

, diabetic and heart diseases type of

health

issues spread in generations.

However

, if relevant organizations implement

such

a rule to increased prices of

the

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sugar

products or ingredients, so consumers may think twice before purchasing those

foods

while purchasing inexpensive or

alternative

healthier

foods

. As an example, if governments introduce low cab healthier

foods

with cheaper

price

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prices

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for users, so manufacturers will

reduced

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glucose

contain

food

due to expensive taxes to those.

Therefore

, increasing prices may

positive

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impact for

reduce

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health

problems

that

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related to

sugar

consume

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consumption

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.

Moreover

, by proposing new rules and

regulation

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to

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the

foods

that contain

glucose

those who produced high

sugar

meals may consider

to promote

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alternative

inexpensive

foods

that contain low

sugar

levels. To exemplify

this

,

food

manufactured can

introduced

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alternative

food

to compete with the

fast

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fast-food

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food

industry that

contain

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contains

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high

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a high

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level of sweetness by cooking organic

foods

and beverage to become popular among consumers. In fact, people of sweet

food

lovers

,

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may find

alternative

foods

to

fulfill

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their daily needs. To conclude, implementing government policies and

regulation

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regulations

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to control high

glucose

contain materials while promoting inexpensive organic

foods

that

cab-free

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may definitely reduce the

consume

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consumption

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of high

sugar

food

among

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globe

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the globe

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. In my opinion,

then

we can reduce most of the

health

problems that spread

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globe

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based on these high

sugar

contain meals.