Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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production industries rely on high

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or

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number of

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issues all over the globe. Some argue that

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relevant authorities can implement policies to increase the price of

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people use of those

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level of

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in nowadays that cause the main reason to rising of blood

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a rule to increased prices of

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products or ingredients, so consumers may think twice before purchasing those

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while purchasing inexpensive or

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healthier

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with cheaper

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for users, so manufacturers will

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due to expensive taxes to those.

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the

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that contain

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those who produced high

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meals may consider

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inexpensive

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that contain low

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industry that

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level of sweetness by cooking organic

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and beverage to become popular among consumers. In fact, people of sweet

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lovers

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may find

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to

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their daily needs. To conclude, implementing government policies and

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to control high

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contain materials while promoting inexpensive organic

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of high

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we can reduce most of the

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problems that spread

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based on these high

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contain meals.