Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt in the importance of a
parent
's role in their
child
's life.
However
, sometimes people differ on the roles which a
parent
play, whether it is to educate them on right or wrong or to nurture them and provide them
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safe environment. We shall see both sides of
this
coin in
this
essay. On one hand, a
child
's basic sense of what is right and wrong comes from his upbringing.
This
is where the concept is
first
introduced to a
child
. It is without a doubt a
parent
's role to instil
such
values in their
child
, as these are the foundations of what will make them a productive member of society in the future.
In addition
, to
this
,
parents
are
also
responsible to explain to
children
the concepts of hygiene.
For example
, in technopark Trivandrum, in many of the toilets, you will see a notice stating that people should not spit chewing gum in the urinals. On viewing
this
, one might think
this
is an odd message to put up.
However
,
this
is a problem, because many IT professionals do in fact spit their chewing gum in the toilets. Their reason for doing
this
is that cleaning the toilets is someone else's job so why should they bother. The other side of the coin is that
parents
should create a nurturing environment for their
children
.
This
is
also
true because, with the advancement of technology and the internet, there is so much pressure on the
children
. There is pressure from their peers, to look good, pressure from schools and
parents
to succeed.
However
, if the
children
can openly talk with their
parents
,
then
half of the problems will get solved because their
parents
can advise them, and even in extreme cases get them help which is needed. If
parents
, do not do
this
they will create a disconnect with their
children
which at times can have dire consequences. in conclusion, I feel it is important for a
parent
to play the dual role of a disciplinarian and a nurturer because being a
child
today is very difficult and confusing and as their primary carer, they will often seek advice from them.
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