You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir / Madam! I am writing in connection with our college
cafeteria
. Since almost every student spends some time here every
day
, I believe it is in everyone's best interest to find ways to improve the quality of
this
central eatery. The
cafeteria
itself is modern, spacious and attractive. The newly painted murals of the seaside give the seating area an open, airy, outdoor feeling which makes it very pleasant to eat meals there.
This
is
further
enhanced by the large green plants and flowing water fountains. The main problem with the
cafeteria
is
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the food served!
First
of all, there is a very limited selection available. Each
day
offers up only standard North American fare of hamburgers, hot dogs, chicken nuggets and french fries. Not only is
this
selection unhealthy, but
also
uninteresting
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day
in and
day
out. We have so many international students on campus, it would be wonderful to have some curries, burritos and falafel added to the menu.
Secondly
, since
this
is a student
cafeteria
, prices need to stay low. We have unfortunately seen two price hikes in the
last
two years. I am sure if we offer a wider range of foods, at better prices, the
cafeteria
will continue to run profitably as more students choose to eat there. Yours faithfully, Daniel Bernard
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