Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Living in a world
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always "online", connected to something, we are constantly overwhelmed by information and our free
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seems to disappear sucked by emails, twitters and WhatsApp that as vampires drop by drop consume our days. With leisure
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constantly disappearing from our lives, the question comes automatically what should we do with that
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? Some
people
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think that we should use our free
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for activities that improve our minds, others believe that it is more important to rest. On one hand, reading represents a hobby
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both relaxing and productive, it improves our lexical range and broadens our minds taking us to places we never saw and allowing us to live battles we did not face;
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,
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are now overwhelmed by information and reading
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after a stressful workday could be perceived as an additional "work task" by some.
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, in today society someone who wants to spend all his weekend in bed resting and watching TV series could easily be perceived as lazy and useless, not adapt to
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fast-paced world. In my opinion, as it happens with many situations, the truth lies in the middle; while spending all your weekend in bed could be counterproductive, enrolling in more challenging and productive tasks could cause
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to never rest and entering a loop of constant fatigue. In conclusion, while activities that improve the mind should be preferred when possible we should
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allow
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to take their
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to rest and we should reduce the stigma of spending free
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just resting and recharging to be ready for the
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day.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive abilities
  • mental stagnation
  • intellectually stimulating
  • relaxation
  • meditation
  • stress reduction
  • overall well-being
  • personal development
  • life satisfaction
  • sense of achievement
  • emotional balance
  • peace of mind
  • scientific evidence
  • memory
  • learning
  • creativity
  • emotional regulation
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