Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
Some would argue that laptops, desktops are often utilized in education that has an advantage, while others say that it has a disadvantage in the longer run. While excessive usage has a negative impact on
kids
physically and mentally. I believe that computers
provide more features
which makes life easier to
everyone.
On one hand, Change preposition
for
computers
can damage children at later
stage due to Add an article
a later
its
often Correct pronoun usage
their
consumptions
. Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
Kids
have online study in their schools and teachers conduct the class over multiple applications online. These devices also
have in built
Correct your spelling
inbuilt
features
such
as Microsoft Teams and Zoom where student
does not have to go anywhere. Add an article
the student
a student
Due to continues
activity Change preposition
Continues
over
online makes Change preposition
apply
students
lethargic. As a result
, this
impacts on
their both mental and physical health. Change preposition
apply
For example
, classes on computers
during covid-19
pandemic has Correct article usage
the covid-19
make
Change the verb form
made
kids
inactive due
excessive usage of screens. Add the preposition
todue
However
, I believe that it is primary
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the primary
responsibilities
of parents to take care of their Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
kids
for recreational activities so that they can have balance in everything.
On the other hand
, It provides more flexibility to the students
. Everyone can access stuffs
on different platforms Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
such
as YouTube, The GreatLearning and The Upgrad
. Teachers can take the class over the internet where they can see each other through Correct your spelling
Upgrade
webcam
. Online platforms have screen sharing, whiteboard, presentations Add an article
a webcam
features
where students
can easily see what their teachers are displaying. This
saves numerous time of
the learners in commuting. Change preposition
for
For example
, many students
became familiar with these electronic devices which did not stop the school and education remained
continue in even lockdown of Add the particle
toremained
covid-19
pandemic . Add an article
a covid-19
the covid-19
Therefore
, I believe that these devices are blessing
for all Correct article usage
a blessing
the
learners.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
apply
kids
have adverse
Add an article
an adverse
effect
on Fix the agreement mistake
effects
access
Add an article
the access
of
Change preposition
to
computers
frequently. However
, It comes with many useful features
where certain restrictions can reduce negative results on children.Submitted by rishu1210 on
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