As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice?

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There is no doubt that these days

kepping

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keeping

minority

languages

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as Arabic from fading has a great reason for concern worldwide. The question is, is it right to establish measures

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preserve these

languages

from dying? In

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essay, I am going to draw my own point of view regarding

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protection. A country’s

language

has been always defining its identity. The main reason given to support

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claim is that allowing a person to speak its unique

language

will keep diversity among people. To illustrate, both the fascination and curiosity that a

language

can bring will directly attract many

language

learners to study it.

In other words

, when

language lovers

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travel to explore and learn

specific

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language

this

language

-speaking country will be famous and welcome more learners, which in turn improves the economy in general.

Thus

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growth is vital not only for the citizens but

also

to the

language

itself.

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However

, speaking a

minority

language

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step in

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globalization. For two main factors,

firstly

, the

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language

is the main type of communication between countries. In other

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, speaking a major

language

such

as English is

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essential to prevent misunderstanding that can happen by sticking

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own

langauge

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language

Secondly

minority

languages

can negatively impact

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a country’s development. Due to the

dact

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fact

that,

eveloving

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evolving

requires engaging with

big

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country

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countries

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such

as the USA and China, so by knowing their

langauges

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language

languages

will result in a country’s flourishing.

Hence

minority

languages

should not be

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encouraged

in order to protect a position in the developed world.

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although

speaking a world

language

is demanding for globalization, it has its drawback effects.

Therefore

, I believe that using our own

language

is outweigh the benefit of speaking the world

language

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Topic Vocabulary:

Minority languages
Cultural heritage
Language revitalization
Bilingualism
Multilingualism
Cultural identity
Language preservation
Indigenous languages
Global diversity
Language courses
Language death
Worldviews
Cognitive benefits
Inclusive society
Economic opportunities

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